The walk through the underground path was like no other Josh had experienced. So give it all you have when you are reviewing. All constructive criticism will be accepted in stride. Keep me motivated! Positive and negative comments are accepted (though I long prefer positive, I take the good with the bad). Feel free to review after any of the chapters. The symptoms of confusion is a 50% chance of hitting yourself and being completely bewildered on the storyline. Warning : Please read the stories in order or confusion will occur. On the Wind's Surface is going to be board and rather lenghty. Some parts leans towards so I will tell you what those chapters are when I get to them in Black Night Clouds. Just because it is dark doesn't mean people cannot have a bit of humor in their lives. I put comic relief as much as I can when I see fit to relax the reader from the dire situations. But do not believe that this story does not have an humor in it. It does get pretty bad in Black Night Clouds but not so much in Brewing A Storm. It does have cussing (to some degree) and violence. It's kind of darker than a normal pokemon fan fiction. The rating of the fan fiction is actually teen. Can a person bring justice to a land scarred by the flames of crime? So even with a shining pathway to tranquility, the world continues to blacken into the darkness of nigh. The scarcity of members is become evident and many do not wish that they are doing their job enough. The International Police has broken up into several different departments across the world to protect the security of the Pokemon World. With tough times comes even tougher justice. Not to mention the increasing numbers of lone wolves. A Mafia by the name Kanto Killers as well as the newly reinstated Team Rocket is running wild. The society of Pokemon is nothing like people had expected. Crime has sky rocketed in each region of the world. Trainers no longer just use their pokemon to just obtain gym badges but to obtain what they truly desire in life. Blood has been poured against the white sands of innocence. Though the story starts off rather light hearted, it evolves into something deeper when things aren't as good as they seemed on the surface. It starts by him catching his first pokemon at the Power Plant. The story follows a trainer by the name of Josh Surge, son of Lt. Intermission: Howling Breeze-Peaceful WindĬhapter XVII: Breathing Air, Exhaling GustĬhapter XVIII: Reflection Against A Dark PlaneĬhapter XIV: Standing on A Burning Bridge (Coming Soon)īrewing A Storm, B lack Night Clouds, and On the Wind's Surface is a three part fan fiction. Chapter II: Over Protection, Under ControlĬhapter IV: Son of the Vermilion, Strike Your LightningĬhapter III: A Broken Mirror Makes A Good KnifeĬhapter IX: To Those Who Fell In DarknessĬhapter XIII: Death is only mourned once.
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